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Barcelona proposes signing Alvarez
The mistake is that the text contains incomplete or unclear information, as it states: "Barcelona made an offer to sign Alvariez from Atlético according to Laporta. The full name, email—what is the correction?" It is a mixture of incomplete news and pleading or instructional phrases about correcting the information, with the repeated phrase in an unclear manner. This leads to a lack of clarity and incomplete information in a non-professional way. The text needs to be clearly and precisely drafted, specifying that Barcelona made an offer to sign Alvariez from Atlético, and that Laporta confirmed this, while removing unnecessary phrases and summarizing to make it a clear news report.
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